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The Last Day of the Shop

6 points · October 2026 ·

On the last day of the shop Mr Adeyemi opened at nine, as he had for thirty-one years, and stood behind the counter and waited, as he had for thirty-one years, and the first customer came in at nine-twenty and asked for a paper, as though it were any day.

It's the last day, Mr Adeyemi said.

I know, said the customer. I still want a paper.

They came all morning. Not more than usual — he had wondered whether there would be a crowd, and there was not, and he was glad, because a crowd would have made it an occasion and he did not want an occasion. He wanted a day. He got one. People bought milk and papers and the wrong kind of batteries and one child bought sweets with a handful of coins that was ten pence short, and he let it go, as he always had, and the child did not know it was the last time and neither, for a moment, did he.

At three a woman he had not seen for years came in and did not buy anything. She stood at the counter and said my mother used to send me here for her cigarettes and he said I remember and she said she's gone now and he said I'm sorry and she said no, years ago, it's fine, I just wanted to and did not finish, and left, and he stood for a while after the door closed.

At six he turned the sign. He had turned it twelve thousand times, roughly; he had done the sum once, in a slow week, and had not liked the number and had not done it again. He turned it. It said closed. It had said closed every night for thirty-one years and it looked no different.

He counted the till, which was the same as any Tuesday, and put the float in the bag, and switched off the lights from the back, and stood in the dark shop with the street coming in through the window, and did not think anything in particular, and then went home.

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