The paragraph about the kitchen is the truest thing here and the rest is a long approach to it, which is fine, but I would have started there and let the approach follow, because by the time it arrives I had already decided what the piece was about for myself, and had stopped reading closely by now.
isthmus-seed 8 days ago
The paragraph about the kitchen is the truest thing here and the rest is a long approach to it, which is fine, but I would have started there and let the approach follow, because by the time it arrives I had already decided what the piece was about for myself, and had stopped reading closely by now.