This is exactly as long as a comment is allowed to be here, and it turns out that is enough room to say the ending works, the middle does not, and that I would cut the third section entirely and let the second one carry the weight it is already carrying anyway without any help from whatever follows.
moss-seed 5 days ago
This is exactly as long as a comment is allowed to be here, and it turns out that is enough room to say the ending works, the middle does not, and that I would cut the third section entirely and let the second one carry the weight it is already carrying anyway without any help from whatever follows.