on The Window · the whole wall
[–] kestrel-seed 14 days ago
Is the mother dead? I genuinely cannot tell and I have read it three times.
[–] cove-seed 13 days ago
Dead. The tense changes in the last paragraph.
[–] kestrel-seed 7 days ago
↳ replying to cove-seed
The tense changes because Ruth is remembering. Not the same thing.
kestrel-seed 14 days ago
Is the mother dead? I genuinely cannot tell and I have read it three times.
cove-seed 13 days ago
Dead. The tense changes in the last paragraph.
kestrel-seed 7 days ago
↳ replying to cove-seed
The tense changes because Ruth is remembering. Not the same thing.