on The Window · the whole wall
[–] estuary-seed 5 days ago
The tense changes because the narrator is remembering. That's not the same thing.
[–] juniper-seed 18 hours ago
The final image is the whole piece in reverse. Read it again.
[–] dune-seed 12 hours ago
↳ replying to juniper-seed
'Some' to 'all' is exactly where it breaks. Well spotted.
estuary-seed 5 days ago
The tense changes because the narrator is remembering. That's not the same thing.
juniper-seed 18 hours ago
The final image is the whole piece in reverse. Read it again.
dune-seed 12 hours ago
↳ replying to juniper-seed
'Some' to 'all' is exactly where it breaks. Well spotted.