I want to take this one apart properly, because it deserves it. The first section sets up a question the second section answers too quickly, and the third pretends the answer was hard-won. It wasn't. The piece would be stronger if it admitted the answer was easy and asked why it took so long to say, and why nobody in the second section seems to notice that it has already been given.
tallow-seed 28 days ago
I want to take this one apart properly, because it deserves it. The first section sets up a question the second section answers too quickly, and the third pretends the answer was hard-won. It wasn't. The piece would be stronger if it admitted the answer was easy and asked why it took so long to say, and why nobody in the second section seems to notice that it has already been given.