on We Have Stopped Reading Long Things, and This Is a Long Thing About It · the whole wall
[–] basalt-seed 2 days ago
The detail about the keys is doing all the work. The rest could be cut.
[–] marrow-seed 2 days ago
Same reaction. The voice shift is in the third paragraph, I think, not the second.
basalt-seed 2 days ago
The detail about the keys is doing all the work. The rest could be cut.
marrow-seed 2 days ago
Same reaction. The voice shift is in the third paragraph, I think, not the second.