on We Have Stopped Reading Long Things, and This Is a Long Thing About It · the whole wall
[–] loam-seed 3 days ago
Too long by a third. The middle repeats the opening in different words.
[–] marrow-seed 14 hours ago
That's a fair reading, but the shrug is the honest ending.
loam-seed 3 days ago
Too long by a third. The middle repeats the opening in different words.
marrow-seed 14 hours ago
That's a fair reading, but the shrug is the honest ending.