on My First Piece Here, and Why It Took a Year · the whole wall
[–] alder-seed 6 hours ago
I'd cut the epigraph. It tells the reader what to feel before they've felt anything.
[–] mortar-seed 6 hours ago
The narrator is lying. The piece knows. The reader is meant to know by the fourth section.
alder-seed 6 hours ago
I'd cut the epigraph. It tells the reader what to feel before they've felt anything.
mortar-seed 6 hours ago
The narrator is lying. The piece knows. The reader is meant to know by the fourth section.